Saturday, May 12, 2018

Rainbow Snippet for May 12th and 13th



This weekend’s Rainbow Snippet is not so unsafe for work, but it seemed fitting to keep it on my adults only blog since these six sentences follow last weekend’s little contribution. I hope you’ll check out our Rainbow Snippets Facebook page to find some really good stuff from a number of talented writers sharing LGBTQIA+ related fiction.

Snippet:

On his knees Nickolas grabbed each elbow, forearms aligned crosswise, turned head resting upon them. He looked at me through streamers of caramel, molasses, and cinnamon.

I brushed the long fall off his back, careful to uncover his face as well. I wanted and in fact needed to see any and all changes in expression. They would lead me where he needed taken.

“Stop code is ‘Dreaming of Me’, okay?”

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I hope you enjoyed reading. Do you know the Depeche Mode song from which their power exchange code derives?

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12 comments:

  1. This is a lovely and tender moment. I like the way he intends to be responsive.

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  2. Great scene establishing safety and tenderness between them.

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    1. Thank you. I have fun establishing that between these two.

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  3. Intense, underlaid with sweetness...well done!

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  4. Very sweet scene. Just lovely! 💕

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    1. Thank you so much. Finding this made my afternoon. Be well!

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  5. Mmm...I love the description of the streamers, how the scene draws you in... thanks for sharing! :)

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  6. Sounds like an intriguing start to something. Love the care he shows.
    And I love your page header! Good memories.

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  7. How fabulous! It's nice to bump into another writer, and thank you for letting me know about Rainbow Snippets. I will have to check it out. Marvelous writing by the way- :)

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