This weekend’s Rainbow Snippet is not so unsafe for
work, but it seemed fitting to keep it on my adults only blog since these
six sentences follow last weekend’s little contribution. I hope you’ll check out our
Rainbow Snippets Facebook page to find some really good stuff from a number of talented
writers sharing LGBTQIA+ related fiction.
Snippet:
On his knees Nickolas
grabbed each elbow, forearms aligned crosswise, turned head resting upon them.
He looked at me through streamers of caramel, molasses, and cinnamon.
I brushed the long fall off
his back, careful to uncover his face as well. I wanted and in fact needed to
see any and all changes in expression. They would lead me where he needed
taken.
“Stop code is ‘Dreaming of
Me’, okay?”
~
I hope you enjoyed reading. Do you know the Depeche
Mode song from which their power exchange code derives?
#rainbowsnippets
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This is a lovely and tender moment. I like the way he intends to be responsive.
ReplyDeleteThank you. You're very kind.
DeleteGreat scene establishing safety and tenderness between them.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I have fun establishing that between these two.
DeleteIntense, underlaid with sweetness...well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you! You're very kind.
DeleteVery sweet scene. Just lovely! 💕
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Finding this made my afternoon. Be well!
DeleteMmm...I love the description of the streamers, how the scene draws you in... thanks for sharing! :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like an intriguing start to something. Love the care he shows.
ReplyDeleteAnd I love your page header! Good memories.
This was very sweet.
ReplyDeleteHow fabulous! It's nice to bump into another writer, and thank you for letting me know about Rainbow Snippets. I will have to check it out. Marvelous writing by the way- :)
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